I love how you expressed your feelings as waves of emotions, they overcome you and you feel as if you cannot breathe. Everyone can relate to this poem because we have all felt emotional at one point, and just had to let the feelings wash over us. The words are a little difficult to read at some points because of the resolution of the computer screen. You have beautiful handwriting; it also helped express the steady flow of water. Overall, the word choice helps define the beautiful meaning and I love your poem.
Dominique Taylor 
May 05, 2014 @ 16:54:42
I love how you expressed your feelings as waves of emotions, they overcome you and you feel as if you cannot breathe. Everyone can relate to this poem because we have all felt emotional at one point, and just had to let the feelings wash over us. The words are a little difficult to read at some points because of the resolution of the computer screen. You have beautiful handwriting; it also helped express the steady flow of water. Overall, the word choice helps define the beautiful meaning and I love your poem.